The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of five types of
energy
production
in France by
the Change preposition
between
year
1995 and 2005.
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years
Overall
, in both years, the main source if
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of
energy
production
were gas and coal, which together accounted for over half the productionof
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production of
energy
. While
nuclear and other kind
of Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
energy
generted
the least amount of Correct your spelling
generated
energy
in France.
Energy
produced by gas represent
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represented
of
29.63% in the first year and Change preposition
apply
this
showed an increases
to 30.31% in 2005. Correct the article-noun agreement
increase
Likewise
, in 1995, coal generated 29.80% which rose slightly to 30.1% 10 years later.
With regards to the remaining methods of producing energy
, there was an approximately 5% growth in in
the Remove the redundancy
apply
production
of both nuclear and other sources of energy
with 10.10% and 9.10% respectively. Petrol, on the other hand
, was only
source of Add an article
the only
energy
which decreased in production
from 29.27% in 1995to
around a fifth (19.55%) in 2005.Correct your spelling
1995 to
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