The bar chart beow shows the percentage of Australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010,

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The

graph illustrates the figures of Australian

men

and

womwn

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women

doing regular physical activity in different

age

groups

in 2010.

Overall

, it is evident that in all of the

age

groups

except for 15 to 24,

women

had more physical activities than

men

.

Besides

,

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men

and

women

exercised almost

equaly

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equally

in the same year.

First,

according to

the bar chart, Australian

women

in

age

groups

ranging from 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 35 to 44 were the

age

groups

with the highest rate in terms of doing

phisical

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physical

activities with 53.3%, 53% and 52.5% respectively.

Then

, 48.9% of females

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between 25 to 34 did

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regular exercise.

Furthermore

, the female youngsters (

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from 15 to 24) and the

women

in their sixties , exercised less than other

age

groups

with 47.7% and 47.1% respectively.

On the other hand

, 52.8% of males had the highest rate of regular activities in the minimum

age

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.

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women

in the range of 35 to 44 who

workedout

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roughly 53% on a regular basis,

men

had the lowest percentage of physical activity

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with all

age

groups

with 39.5%.