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The bar chart beow shows the percentage of Australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010,

The bar chart beow shows the percentage of Australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010,
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The
 graph illustrates the figures of Australian
men
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 and
womwn
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women
 doing regular physical activity in different
age
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groups
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 in 2010.
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, it is evident that in all of the
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groups
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 except for 15 to 24,
women
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 had more physical activities than
men
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.
Besides
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,
elderlies'
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men
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 and
women
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 exercised almost
equaly
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equally
 in the same year.
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according to
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 the bar chart, Australian
women
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 in
age
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groups
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 ranging from 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 35 to 44 were the
age
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groups
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 with the highest rate in terms of doing
phisical
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physical
 activities with 53.3%, 53% and 52.5% respectively.
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, 48.9% of females
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aging
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 between 25 to 34 did
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apply
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the
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regular exercise.
Furthermore
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, the female youngsters (
aging
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 from 15 to 24) and the
women
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 in their sixties , exercised less than other
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groups
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 with 47.7% and 47.1% respectively.
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, 52.8% of males had the highest rate of regular activities in the minimum
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ranges
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.
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women
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 in the range of 35 to 44 who
workedout
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worked out
workout
 roughly 53% on a regular basis,
men
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 had the lowest percentage of physical activity
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 with all
age
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groups
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 with 39.5%.
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