Some people believe that zoos have no place in the modern society, while others claim zoos are good places which are often used for beneficial purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,

people

argue that

zoos

are

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should be in

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places

and contrary to animal rights. Restriction of

animals

with a limited place is unconscionable.

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essay will argue

that

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zoos

should have a place or not. In living at

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century , provides us

a

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lof

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of rights. Animal

right

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rights

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is

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one of the most important

one

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. The main difference between

animals

and

human

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humans

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is talking

skill

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. Apart from that ability,

human

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and

animals

are very similar

to

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another

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attitude

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. They can feel, they can

afraid

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etc... As a human, freedom

emotion

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is

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the one of the most important

feeling

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. In history, many wars were caused

of

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freedom feeling. In our current life, we are feeling angry when somebody

restricted

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us.

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, If you don't allow

to

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a runner to run he/she will feel restricted.

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is

same

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with

put

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a lion into

the

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cage. Followed by a discussion of how it can

some times

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lead to

zoos

are

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the

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entertaining and instructive

places

for

people

especially

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for

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kids. In

zoos

,

people

can see and know all

animals

around the world.

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, you don't need to go

South

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to South

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Africa

for

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see a penguin.

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,

zoos

are

touristic

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places

where

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appealing

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of

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many tourists. The South Zoo

,

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is located in Vienna , more visited than Belvedere Palace. Mostly,

zoos

are have

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entrance

fee

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so

this

income can

contrubite

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contribute

to

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the country

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country

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economy too. My opinion is

animal

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animals

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should live

on

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their own environment

as

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a

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free. They should live with their animal instincts. They should prey and walk when they want. In conclusion,

people

should respect animal rights and their lives. But

also

zoos

are necessary for

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places

.