The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at a line graph provided reveals the figure of US
energy
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intake by Fuel
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as petrol and oil, coal, natural gas, solar/wind and hydropower, measured quadrillion units, between 1980 and 2030.
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, there was a progressive growth pattern recorded and it is predicted in almost all data except for that of hydropower which has remained stable.
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, the amount of consumed power from conventional
energy
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has been far higher than that of alternative sources of
energy
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. In terms of traditional
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, the consumption of Petrol and Oil consistently remained the highest., Fluctuating around 35 from 1980 to 1995, the data
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rapidly increased to 40
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2008 before being predicted to continuously rise to 50 by 2030. Regarding the consumption of Natural Gas and Coal, despite sharing a common trend, they exhibit different growth levels.
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particular, the former fluctuates within the range of 15 to 25 in the initial 28-year period of time, which
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will experience a stable around 25 from 2015 to 2030. Meanwhile, the latter experiences rapid and continuous growth from over 15 to approximately 30, which has experienced a two-fold increase in half a century. In terms of renewable
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, despite having homogeneous initial points at nearly 5 in 1980, they were recorded and are estimated to have different trends .
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that of nuclear and solar/wind show a slight and continuous increase to over 5, the remaining sources remain unchanged around that number during the mentioned period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • trends
  • marked increase
  • dominant source
  • modest increase
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • noticeable decline
  • span
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
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