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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart above illustrates the figure for manufacturing and
consumption
 of
eletricity
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electricity
 by
top
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the top
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 ten distinct countries during a
specefic
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specific
 year, 2014. With
a
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overall
 glance, it is evident that
while
 the China and United
states
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States
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 were the most
manufacturer
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manufacturers
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 and
consumer
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consumers
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 of
electricity
, Korea had the least amount for both
consumption
 and production. China and
United
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the United
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 States were the biggest
electricity
producer
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producers
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 in 2014 with over
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5000 billion
kWh
 and 4000
kWh
 respectively.
However
, China with 5322 billion
kWh
 and
United
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the United
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 States with 3866 billion
kWh
 had the most
consumption
 of
electricity
 in the world.
Also
 noteworthy is that Germany was the only country among these nations
which its
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consumption
 (582.5) was more
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 its production (526.6). Korea was the least consumer(449.5) and producer(485.1) throughout the world. The amount of
electricity
 production and
consumption
 in Russia was nearly identical (1057 and 1038).
The other
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Other
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 countries
such
 as Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea were the least consumer and producer in 2014.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, electricity, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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