The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart below illustrates the portion of working time, individuals compartmentalize their time rate on different activities essentially in two divert years 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, In the year
1958, working percent
and sleeping had a high rate Change the spelling
per cent
while
other activities had a low percentage. In contrast
, in the year
2008 working and sleeping were still one top while
relaxing at home became the third activity.
Despite this
, time working in the year
1958 was 33 percent
but had increased by 9 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
year
2008. In addition
, sleeping had decreased by 7 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Hence
, Going out with friends and family was 19 percent
in the year
1958 whereas
in 2008 had decreased by 13 percent
, however
, relaxing at home was 8 percent
in 1958, which increased by 5 percent
in 2008. Moreover
, another activity remains the same.Submitted by alihafiid on
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