The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The chart given illustrates, expenditures per week for 8
catagories
Correct your spelling
categories
such
as fuel,food, housing
in 1968 and 2018. The Correct word choice
and housing
unit
are given by percentage.
Fix the agreement mistake
units
Overall
, people spent most of their money for
nutrition in 1968, which Change preposition
on
replaced
with leisure in 2018. Spending a lot of money on fuel and power was less popular for both years.
Add a missing verb
was replaced
Firstly
, persons
spent about 35 Replace the word
people
percent
of their income Change the spelling
per cent
for
food in 1968, and it Change preposition
on
was went
down by twice in 2018. Change the verb form
went
Although
,
the figures for leisure time expenditures Remove the comma
apply
was
only 9 Change the verb form
were
percent
in 1968, it was Change the spelling
per cent
icreased
about 2,5 times by 2018.
As can be seen from Correct your spelling
increased
chart
, people spent less than 7 Add an article
the chart
percent
of their income Change the spelling
per cent
for
fuel and power . It is Change preposition
on
fact
that Correct article usage
a fact
spendings
on household goods Fix the agreement mistake
spending
was remain
the same Change the verb form
remained
in
1968 and 2018. Amounts for personal goods and clothing decreased 2 times.Change preposition
between
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