The line chart below shows the effect of vaccination on the number of reported cases of whooping cough, a childhood disease, in Britain.
The given line graph represents how different numbers of
cases
of whooping have been reported from 1940 to 1990 in Britain.
From the graph, we can tell that the highest number
of cases
of whooping cough was reported in 1941, which was about 170,000 cases
. The number
of reported cases
had quite up and down until vaccination began in 1956. From the year of the beginning of vaccination, the number
of reported cases
rapidly decreased until it recorded almost 0 in 1972. However
, its number
had a little bit of up and down when the rate of vaccination was low, remaining under 60,000 cases
. Finally
, cases
of whooping cough in Britain were barely reported since 2000.Submitted by pjh011205 on
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