The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The
two
pie charts compare the percentages of students who were British at a specific university in England and spoke other languages
besides
English in two
different years, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Spanish was the biggest proportion in both years. Another language
and two
other languages
categories had increased, Change the noun form
language
while
no other language
and French groups had decreased. German group, however
, did not change and was the smallest language
which British students were able to speak.
There are broad similarity
between Spanish, Another Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
language
, and Two
other languages
categories. The biggest percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
language
the
British students could speak Spanish Correct article usage
apply
in addition
to English in 2000, at 30%, this
figure had increased to more than a third in 2010. Similarly
, another language
and two
other languages
groups had raised 5% each, from 15 to 20 Change the noun form
language
percent
and from 10 to 15 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively.
Change the spelling
per cent
By contrast
, the percentages of No other languages
and French had fell. The former was
occupied the second position at a fifth in 2000 but decreased twofold in 2010. The latter, Unnecessary verb
apply
also
, fell from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010. German language
, however
, was
the smallest percentage in both years.Verb problem
had
Submitted by sr.alizadeh9191 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, languages, language with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼