The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The image illustrates the process of making instant noodles in a factory.
Overall
, it is clear that
the cycle consists of eight distinct phases, commencing with the storing of flour in the silos and progressing towards sticking the labels on the cups.
Initially
, the flour is transported via a truck to be stored in the silos. Following
this
, the water and oil are prepared and combined with the flour in a mixer before the dough is subsequently
processed through rollers to form noodle discs from dough sheets and strips.
Subsequent to these initial processes, the noodles are cooked in oil, then
dried and placed into cups. Vegetables and spices are added to the noodles to complete the cup contents. Finally
, the cups are labeled
and sealed in preparation for distribution and eventual sale.Change the spelling
labelled
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