The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.
The pie charts depict energy
production
in
five sources for five years into Change preposition
from
period
of times in France. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Add an article
a period
the period
Overall
, the majority of the production
is gas
in both. The majority of the production
is gas
in both periods. However
, other was the least produced.
First and foremost, gas
and cold took a large amount of a number of being produced in 1995 and 2005. Both were around 30% among other categories. Moreover
, petro production
saw decrease
from 29% to 19%, which was the only category that was reduced. On the other, hand nuclear and other experience rose in 2005, the percentage of these categories went up to 10% and 9% respectively.
To draw the conclusion, the only energy that fell was petro. Add an article
a decrease
in contrast
, the energy that remained stable were
Change the verb form
was
gas
and coal. at the same time, the sources of nuclear and other went upSubmitted by syifensaft
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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