You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the water price in five
difference
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different
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cities
in Australia, which consists of Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, Perth and Sydney. The table shows in
dollars
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the table that usage
charges
is
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are
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different between under and over 125
kilolitres
.
Charges
with over 125
kilolitres
usege
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usage
are the same or more than
charges
with under 125
kilolitres
usage, which
are depend
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depend
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on the
cities
. Comparing usage
charges
in
difference
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different
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cities
,
charges
in Melbourne and Sydney have the same rate applied to all users, not depending on
amount
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the amount
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of used water, which is 0.81
dollars
and 0.98
dollars
per kilolitre respectively.
In contrast
, other
cities
charge users with higher
rate
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rates
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when they use more than 125
kilolitres
. Brisbane has the least
different
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difference
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, which is 0.03
dollars
,
while
Perth has the most, which is 1.08
dollars
. Considering
average
Correct article usage
the average
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bill per household, all of the
cities
have almost the same cost, except Melbourne which has less bill than others around 60
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, dollars, charges, kilolitres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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