the line chart shows the results of survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line graph provides data about the results of a survey and the reasons why individuals moved to the capital
city
of a particular country.
Overall
, in all years the main reason why humans moved to the capital was employment
.
As can be seen, in all years the main reason why humans moved to the capital was employment
. In 2000, 60000 people
moved to the capital because of the employment
. The figure of individuals who moved to the capital due to
employment
rose and its peak was in 2010 where
more than 90000 Correct word choice
when
people
moved to the city
because of the
Correct article usage
apply
employment
. In 2015 the number
of people
who moved to the city
because of the employment
was a little less than 90000.
Initially
, roughly 25000 people
moved to the capital because of the study, the number
of people
who moved to the capital increased and in 2015 the number
of people
who moved to the capital was a little less than 90000 which was equal to the number
of humans who moved to the city
because of the employment
. In all years the least number
of people
who moved to the capital was because of friends/family and adventure.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, employment, people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 12 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "a little less than" was used 2 times.
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