The diagrams below shows the stages and equipment in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below shows the stages and equipment in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagrams illustrate how
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how it is used in the production of concrete for construction. The 5-step process of making
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is linear and starts with the combination of three raw materials that are crushed, mixed, heated, ground, and bagged. The
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added to a concrete mixer with three other ingredients to produce concrete. The making of concrete has several steps. Limestone and clay are crushed into powder and mixed together.
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powder
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passes through a rotating heater. After being heated, the mixture is ground down to form
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. The
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bagged for easy transport. There are 4 ingredients used to make
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which is a simpler process. The proportions of these materials are 15%
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, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel. They are mixed together in a specialized mixer to form concrete
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used for building purposes.
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