The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
While
the chart above illustrates the Linking Words
exports'
Change noun form
exports
value
of a country in five distinct Use synonyms
categories
over the period 2015 to 2016, the table demonstrates Use synonyms
the
these percentage change in 2016.
With an Remove the article
apply
overall
glance, it is evident that except Linking Words
gems
and Change preposition
for gems
jewellery
the Add a comma
jewellery,
value
of all of these Use synonyms
categories
Use synonyms
were risen
in 2016 and textiles was the category which has had the most rise.
Petroleum Change to the active voice
rose
products
and engineered goods were the most valuable Use synonyms
categories
with the Use synonyms
value
of 60 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
and 58 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
respectively in 2015, followed by a slight increase in petroleum Use synonyms
products
(3 per Use synonyms
cen
) Correct your spelling
cent
as well as
engineered goods (8.5 per cent).
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the export Linking Words
earning
in agricultural Correct your spelling
earnings
products
Use synonyms
has
had a marked rise (15.24 per cent) and in agricultural Correct subject-verb agreement
have
products
with a slight rise percentage of 0.81 were the other Use synonyms
categories
that increased gradually. Gems and jewellery had been the only category whose Use synonyms
value
dropped over the Use synonyms
pass
Correct your spelling
past
of
time from 45 Change preposition
apply
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
to 40 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
(5.18 per cent).Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, categories, products, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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