the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.
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The graphs below illustrate the percentage of
water
used for different goals in six zones of the world.
Overall
, What stands out from the charts is that in all of the six areas, they had the lowest domestic use
above the other purposes.
However
, Europe and North America had the highest industrial use
, respectively. As we can see, agricultural use
is more prevalent in Central Asia
than in other continents. But Domestic use
in Central
Asia
is the same as Southeast Asia
. On the other hand
, in Europe and North America, domestic use
is almost equal to the Asian situation with a two percent
difference. If we check Africa’s Change the spelling
per cent
use
of water
, it can be seen that they are almost second after Asia
in using water
for industrial use
. As the chart shows, in Asia
and Africa, the agricultural use
of water
is far more than in Europe and America, despite the fact that they use
more water
in industries and domestically.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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