the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.
The graphs below illustrate the percentage of
water
used for different goals in six zones of the world.
Overall
, What stands out from the charts is that in all of the six areas, they had the lowest domestic
use
above the other purposes.
However
, Europe and North America had the highest industrial
use
, respectively. As we can see, agricultural
use
is more prevalent in Central
Asia
than in other continents. But Domestic
use
in Central
Asia
is the same as Southeast
Asia
.
On the other hand
, in Europe and North America, domestic
use
is almost equal to the Asian situation with a two
percent
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difference. If we check Africa’s
use
of
water
, it can be seen that they are almost second after
Asia
in using
water
for industrial
use
. As the chart shows, in
Asia
and Africa, the agricultural
use
of
water
is far more than in Europe and America, despite the fact that they
use
more
water
in industries and domestically.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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