The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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a total of 148 movies

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category of romance, a mere 0.8%.

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Topic Vocabulary:

independent films
box office revenue
film production
genre diversity
domestic market
international market
critical reception
trend analysis
market share
year-over-year comparison
growth trajectory
commercial success
film distribution
accolades and awards
viewer reception

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The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people inly ate local produced food. what extend does the advantage outweigh disadvantage?

Many men and women are making the decisions to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impact of this development on both family and society? Give reasons for your answer and include examples

Nowadays, children have high influence of social media on friends on their lives. Whereas, some people believe that they have higher influence of their parents. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

nowadays many people choose to be self-employed , rather than to work for a company or oraganisation.why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?