The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The bar graph illustrates the percentages of the total money spent on three service types in a certain country in Europe,

while

distributing the age groups

comsunimg

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consuming

these services.

Overall

, people under the age of 30 dedicate most of their salaries

for

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to

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resturants

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restaurants

and hotels, but

the

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apply

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others pay most of

the

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their

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incomes

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income

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for food and drinks.

It is clear that

food and drinks are

most

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mostly

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bought by older people particularly

aging from

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those aged

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76

years

and

more

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older

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. The amount of money put

for

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into

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enertainment

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entertainment

facilities varies among the groups,

while

the community between ( 61 to 75)

years

prioritize it with

approxiametly

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approximately

23%

from

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of

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their

overall

spendings

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spending

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, it is notable that

socities

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societies

which are younger than 30

years

old do not pay much attention to

such

entertaining

activtities

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activities

, so they give about 6% only from their budget on it. When it comes to paying for

resturants

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restaurants

and hotels, records show that each person between 61 and 75

years

old

spend

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spends

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less than 5% of their money on

such

destinations.

In contrast

, these places's

finanace

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finances

depends

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depend

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on more than 10% of budgets from both groups ( 31 to 45) and ( 46 to 60).