The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart depicts information about the time spent by males and females on household work respectively in Great Britain.

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, Females contribute a lot more than

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male

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in all types of household work, except gardening, pet care, and maintenance odd jobs. In kitchen work

such

as cooking, baking, and washing females spend 44 min more in a day as compared to males.

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