The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts information about the time spent by males and females on household work respectively in Great Britain.
Overall
, Females contribute a lot more than a
Correct article usage
apply
male
in all types of household work, except gardening, pet care, and maintenance odd jobs.
In kitchen work Fix the agreement mistake
males
such
as cooking, baking, and washing females spend 44 min more in a day as compared to males.Submitted by adarsh.deore12322 on
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