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The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart depicts the most demanding
takeaways
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 of people in Canada and the number of Indian hotels in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
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, it can be explicitly observed that there is a huge demand for Chinese and Indian
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.
In contrast
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,it can be noted that the least
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takeaways
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 in Canada include Mexican, Japanese, and Greek. It is imperative to provide clarity that Indian food has the highest number of
takeaways
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, which is a staggering 34%, closely followed by Chinese food
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 26%.The Italian and Persian foods have an intact figure of 10% and 9%, which is the third highest value compared to the rest of them. Nearly one-fourth of the remaining
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 are at different levels, particularly the 1% shared by Japanese, Greeks, and others. Surprisingly, the percentage of people who never ordered is 11%,
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then
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Itlalian
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Italian
 and Persian
takeaways
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words takeaways with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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