The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the trend of how many people who were originally from

Australia

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and came from another country

staying

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in the

cities

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,

towns

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and rural

areas

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in 1995 and 2010. It is known that people staying in the

cities

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are always far higher compared to those who

lived

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in

towns

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and rural

areas

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. In 1995, Australian

citizen

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citizens

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who were both

gave birth

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born

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in

Australia

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and outside

Australia

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in

majority

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the majority

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lived in the

cities

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. The second highest

number

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of

citizen

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citizens

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lived in

towns

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,

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the lowest

number

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of

poeple

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people

lived in the rural

areas

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.

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, in 2010, the

number

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of all Australian

citizen

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citizens

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living in the

cities

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were

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three to four times higher than those who lived in

towns

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and rural

areas

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. The

number

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of people who lived in the

cities

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increased

from

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in

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the

last

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15 years,

while

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for

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apply

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those who lived in

towns

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and rural

areas

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were

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apply

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significantly decreased to below 20.

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, there were different

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number

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numbers

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of

poeple

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people

who were the origin of

Australia

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and

the

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apply

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newcomer

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newcomers

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staying in the

cities

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,

towns

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, and rural

areas

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in the

year

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years

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1995 and 2010.