The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the trend of how many people who were originally from
Australia
and came from another country staying
in the Wrong verb form
stayed
cities
, towns
and rural areas
in 1995 and 2010. It is known that people staying in the cities
are always far higher compared to those who lived
in Wrong verb form
live
towns
and rural areas
.
In 1995, Australian citizen
who were both Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
gave birth
in Verb problem
born
Australia
and outside Australia
in majority
lived in the Correct article usage
the majority
cities
. The second highest number
of citizen
lived in Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
towns
, while
the lowest number
of poeple
lived in the rural Correct your spelling
people
areas
.
Similarly
, in 2010, the number
of all Australian citizen
living in the Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
cities
were
three to four times higher than those who lived in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
towns
and rural areas
. The number
of people who lived in the cities
increased from
the Change preposition
in
last
15 years, while
for
those who lived in Change preposition
apply
towns
and rural areas
were
significantly decreased to below 20.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, there were different number
of Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
poeple
who were the origin of Correct your spelling
people
Australia
and the
Correct article usage
apply
newcomer
staying in the Fix the agreement mistake
newcomers
cities
, towns
, and rural areas
in the year
1995 and 2010.Fix the agreement mistake
years
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, cities, towns, areas, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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