The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graphs illustrate the proportion of
time
Use synonyms
career-men
and Correct your spelling
career men
career-women
spent on various Correct your spelling
career women
activities
in a nation in the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
year
1958 and 2008.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, working has always been the Linking Words
dominants
Change the noun form
dominant
activity
which Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
followed by sleeping. The least popular Add a missing verb
is then
activities
in 1958 were Use synonyms
traveling
to work and playing sports, Change the spelling
travelling
whereas
in 2008 the most uncommon Linking Words
activity
was going out with friends or family.
The most common Use synonyms
activities
done by the workers were working and sleeping. Working Use synonyms
time
increased from 33% to nearly half Use synonyms
while
sleeping Linking Words
time
decreased from 32% to a quarter. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
time
spent Use synonyms
to hang
out with colleagues Change the verb form
hanging
were
down from 19% to 6%, which made it the least popular Correct subject-verb agreement
was
activity
in the Use synonyms
year
2008.
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Furthermore
, in the Linking Words
year
1958, the least popular Use synonyms
activities
were commuting to work which was only 2%. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
number jumped to 8% in the Linking Words
year
2008 which made it Use synonyms
same
Correct article usage
the same
with
playing sports. Change preposition
as
In addition
, Linking Words
time
spent by the workers to relax at home increased significantly from 8% to 13%, which made it the third most popular Use synonyms
activity
done by the workers in the Use synonyms
year
2008.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, activities, year, activity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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