Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram illustrates the information about two new sites

predictabl

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predictable

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build a new shopping

mall

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for the different

region

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in Brandfield The two

propsal

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proposed

site

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are located along

railway

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which

across

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on road and river which

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the population for indeed shopping.

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north

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of the city center is beside to railway which could serve

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both future

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mall

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. As you see we have

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railway

in the

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of the city from north to

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as well as

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north

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direction is the first probably place

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of the

hosing

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estate which is

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the road,

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the second one is

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beside

railway

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just closed to

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industrial

estate. Regarding to proposal city center is located in between the

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location

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locations

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mall

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where

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across the river.

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the other

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the first site.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words mall with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proximity
residential area
industrial zone
city center
main road
benefits
convenience
traffic congestion
accessibility
workers
compare
differences
pros and cons
suitable
analysis

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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?