Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the information about two new sites predictabl
build a new shopping Correct your spelling
predictable
predictably
mall
for the different region
in Brandfield
The two Fix the agreement mistake
regions
propsal
Correct your spelling
proposed
site
are located along Change to a plural noun
sites
railway
which Add an article
the railway
across
on road and river which Add a missing verb
is across
is increase
the population for indeed shopping. Wrong verb form
increases
However
, north
of the city center is beside to railway which could serve Correct article usage
the north
for
both future Change preposition
apply
mall
.
As you see we have Change to a plural noun
malls
Correct article usage
a rallway
rallway
in the Correct your spelling
railway
center
of the city from north to Change the spelling
centre
west
Add an article
the west
as well as
in north
direction is the first probably place Correct article usage
the north
front
of the Change preposition
in front
hosing
estate which is Correct your spelling
housing
cross
the road, Correct your spelling
across
otherwise
the second one is alonge
path in corner Correct your spelling
a long
besid
of Correct your spelling
beside
railway
just closed to Add an article
the railway
indestrial
estate.
Regarding to proposal city center is located in between the Correct your spelling
industrial
tow
Correct your spelling
two
location
of Fix the agreement mistake
locations
tow
future Correct your spelling
two
mall
Fix the agreement mistake
malls
where
Correct word choice
which
is
across the river. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
On the other hand
the other devision
you can see Correct your spelling
division
galf
count Correct article usage
the galf
nearby
the first site.
Correct your spelling
near
futuer
Correct your spelling
future
mall
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