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The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.

The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The bar chart illustrates the export
earnings
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 of five different groups of products in 2015 and 2016,
while
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 the table gives information about the percentage change in
values
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 of each product
category
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 in the same years in one country. The initial impression is that the
earnings
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 of each product rose when their
values
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 increased. It can be seen from the graphs that the least amount of money was gained from exporting textiles in both 2015 and 2016 which were around 25 and just over 30 billion dollars, respectively.
However
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, petroleum products earned the most amount of money approximately 60 billion dollars in 2015 and
also
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 2016.
According to
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 the figures, the agricultural
category
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 experienced the smallest increase in the percentage change of
values
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 which is under 1 %.
This
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category
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,
in addition
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, did not have notable growth in
earnings
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 from 2015 to 2016.
On the other hand
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, the textiles group underwent the biggest change in the rate of
values
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 which was almost 15 %.
This
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 product
category
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,
moreover
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, had the highest rise of nearly 6% in the amount of
earnings
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, values, category with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export categories
  • percentage change
  • value
  • economic indicators
  • manufactured goods
  • commodities
  • trade balance
  • fluctuations
  • economic conditions
  • domestic production
  • trade policies
  • year-over-year comparison
  • significant increase/decrease
  • trends
  • global market
  • comparison
  • economic implications
  • patterns
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