The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The cycle depicts the way in
whish
Correct your spelling
which
plastics
Change the noun form
plastic
bottles
are recycles
. Wrong verb form
recycled
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that the process consits
of nine stages from collecting the Correct your spelling
consists
bottles
to the
producing end products Correct article usage
apply
that
made from recycled Correct pronoun usage
apply
bottles
.
as the cycle depicts, it start
with collecting all the Change the verb form
starts
bottles
from recycling
bin and transporting it to the Correct article usage
the recycling
recycle
factory. in the factory, all the Change the verb form
recycling
bottles
got
sorted to find which Verb problem
were
bottles
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
can get
recycled and which Wrong verb form
could be
one
Fix the agreement mistake
ones
can't
. All the chosen Wrong verb form
couldn't
bottles
that can get recycled got
compressed into blocks. The blocks got crushed by a grinder machine, the machine Verb problem
are
have
two spiky wheels that function to Wrong verb form
had
crushed
the blocks into smaller pieces, All the crushed Wrong verb form
crush
part
got Fix the agreement mistake
parts
wathed
until it Correct your spelling
washed
clean
in a pool of water. Once Replace the word
cleaned
this
stage completed
, all the crushed pieces Add a missing verb
is completed
is
crushed again in another machine to Change the verb form
are
produced
plastic pellets. The pellets are turned into raw material by heating Change the form of the verb
produce
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Finally
, the raw material will turned into variaties of prosucts
Correct your spelling
products
such
as t-shirt
, Fix the agreement mistake
t-shirts
container
, and stationaries. The cycle that repeats itself over and over againFix the agreement mistake
containers
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