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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The cycle depicts the way in
whish
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which
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plastics
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plastic
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bottles
Use synonyms
 are
recycles
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recycled
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.
Overall
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, it is clearly apparent that the process
consits
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consists
 of nine stages from collecting the
bottles
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 to
the
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apply
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producing end products
that
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apply
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made from recycled
bottles
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. as the cycle depicts, it
start
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starts
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 with collecting all the
bottles
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 from
recycling
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the recycling
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 bin and transporting it to the
recycle
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recycling
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 factory. in the factory, all the
bottles
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got
Verb problem
were
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 sorted to find which
bottles
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that
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apply
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can get
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could be
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 recycled and which
one
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ones
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can't
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couldn't
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. All the chosen
bottles
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 that can get recycled
got
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are
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 compressed into blocks. The blocks got crushed by a grinder machine, the machine
have
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had
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 two spiky wheels that function to
crushed
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crush
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 the blocks into smaller pieces, All the crushed
part
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parts
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 got
wathed
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washed
 until it
clean
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cleaned
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 in a pool of water. Once
this
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 stage
completed
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is completed
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, all the crushed pieces
is
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are
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 crushed again in another machine to
produced
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produce
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 plastic pellets. The pellets are turned into raw material by heating
it
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them
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.
Finally
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, the raw material will turned into variaties of
prosucts
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products
such
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 as
t-shirt
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t-shirts
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,
container
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containers
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, and stationaries. The cycle that repeats itself over and over again

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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