The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The bar
charth
depicts the worth of exports in a country from 2015 to 2016 in Correct your spelling
chart
charts
range
of categories. Meanwhile, the table Correct article usage
a range
illustrate
the information about the Change the verb form
illustrates
peecentage
change in each Correct your spelling
percentage
category
of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Overall
, it is clearly apparent that in 2016 except at
gemps and jewellery Change preposition
for
categore
always Correct your spelling
category
categories
have
higher worth, Wrong verb form
had
whereas
the table shown
that Wrong verb form
shows
this
category
have
some Change the verb form
has
drawback
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
last
year.
Turning to the details, petroleum products and engineered goods have the same jusp
to just over 60 billion Correct your spelling
jump
just
dollar
, meanwhile there Change to a plural noun
dollars
isa
Correct your spelling
is
some
decline in gems and jewellery categories, Correct determiner usage
a
it
is around 41 million Correct pronoun usage
which
dollar
. There Change to a plural noun
dollars
is
Wrong verb form
was
sharp
escalation in Add an article
a sharp
the sharp
textiles
Correct article usage
the textiles
category
in 2016, this
category
reach
roughly 32 million compared to 2015.
Wrong verb form
reached
However
, when it comes to the percentage vhange
in values, the highest jump is in Correct your spelling
change
textiles
Correct article usage
the textiles
category
which reach
Wrong verb form
reached
15.25
% Correct article usage
a 15.25
increased
compared to Wrong verb form
increase
last
year. The descending trend is at gems and jewellery that
drop 5.18% from Correct pronoun usage
which
last
year, and agricultural products have a ceaselessly
growth at 0.81% over the period.Change the adverb
ceaseless
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Vocabulary: Replace the words category with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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