The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.

The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.
The charts detail
demand
for steel and the number of workers employed in a given country over a
one
Add a hyphen
one-year
show examples
year
period. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that both
demand
and employment fluctuated but followed similar
downwards
Change the word
downward
show examples
trends. By the
end
of the period, actual
demand
had overtaken
production
. In the first 2 months of the
year
, workers (6,000), steel
production
(5,000) and actual
demand
(3,000) peaked. From there, the number of workers fell steeply to 3,000 in March and was flat through April,
while
production
dropped below 4,000 tonnes and remained stable
to
Change preposition
until
show examples
July. Actual
demand
also
decreased, though it fluctuated between 2 and 3,000 tonnes through September, before plummeting to 0 in November and recovering to 2,000 in December.
This
end of
Add a hyphen
end-of-year
show examples
year
pattern was largely mirrored by both
production
and employment as the former crashed from a second peak of nearly 5,000 in July to under 1,000 by the
end
of the period (with no recovery). Employment numbers rose to 3,500 in August and had steadily subsided to 1,000 by the
end
of the
year
.
Submitted by n97.mortazian on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, year, end, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demand
  • Employment
  • Industry
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Correspond
  • External factors
  • Steel industry
  • Workforce
  • Economy
  • Planning
  • Forecast
  • Data Interpretation
  • Monthly Analysis
What to do next:
Look at other essays: