The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The table chart displays the data about workers and
manufactures
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production silk in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of total employees
producting
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producing
who are male and female
decalined
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declined
sharrply
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sharply
;
whereas
the data of
factories
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production
silk
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rose dramatically during the period. Looking for more details, the employees for male and female fell sharply during the period.
Moreover
, the
number
of male
employeess
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employees
declined dramatically
at
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53.964 people to 13.375 people. By the same token, the
number
of female workers fell dramatically
at
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76.786 individuals to 25.567 individuals. Regarding
to
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the
number
of factories producing silk in England and Wales, from 1851 to 1901 rose dramatically
at
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272 companies to 623 companies.
However
, the highest of total factories during the period at 761 in 1861.
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