The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The table chart displays the data about workers and
manufactures
production silk in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Replace the word
manufacturers
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of total employees producting
who are male and female Correct your spelling
producing
decalined
Correct your spelling
declined
sharrply
; Correct your spelling
sharply
whereas
the data of factories
production Change noun form
factories'
factory's
silk
rose dramatically during the period.
Looking for more details, the employees for male and female fell sharply during the period. Change preposition
of silk
Moreover
, the number
of male employeess
declined dramatically Correct your spelling
employees
at
53.964 people to 13.375 people. By the same token, the Change preposition
from
number
of female workers fell dramatically at
76.786 individuals to 25.567 individuals.
Regarding Change preposition
from
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
number
of factories producing silk in England and Wales, from 1851 to 1901 rose dramatically at
272 companies to 623 companies. Change preposition
from
However
, the highest of total factories during the period at 761 in 1861.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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