The chart below shows the number of British citizens who emigrated to three countries in three periods of time
The chart provided,
give
information about the Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
number
of british
Change the capitalization
British
citizens
that decide to emigrate to various countries in three periods of time.
In 2004, the highest number
of british
Change the capitalization
British
citizens
recorded emigrated to Australia which is about 42 thousands
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thousand
people
. Following Australia, approximately 35 thousands
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thousand
people
went to Spain, 25 thousands
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thousand
people
went to USA
. And, the Correct article usage
the USA
number
of britanians who depart to France and New Zealand is relatively same
.
In 2005, the Correct article usage
the same
number
of citizens
emigrated
to any Correct pronoun usage
who emigrated
country
declined. But, in 2006 the number
of citizends
who Correct your spelling
citizens
depart
gradually Wrong verb form
departed
rising
. The Wrong verb form
rose
number
hike
from approximately 39 Wrong verb form
hiked
thousands
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thousand
people
in 2005 to 52 thousands
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thousand
people
in 2006. The number
of citizens
that depart to france
dropped from 35 Change the capitalization
France
thousands
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thousand
people
to 26 thousands
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thousand
people
.
In 2007, the number
of people
who leave britain
to any other countries fell again.
We can conclude thatChange the capitalization
Britain
,
Remove the comma
apply
alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
people
took interest
in departing from Correct article usage
an interest
britain
to other countries attributable to Change the capitalization
Britain
any
reasons. 2007 is the year Correct determiner usage
some
where
the highest Correct word choice
when
number
of citizens
depart from britain
to any Change the capitalization
Britain
country
. And, Australia is the most popular country
for british
Change the capitalization
British
people
to emigrate and New Zealand is the least popular country
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