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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.

The graph below represents the different figures
of
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 Australian
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export
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exports
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into
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to
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 four different countries from 1990 to 2012. The four
contries
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countries
 consist of Japan,
US
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the US
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,
China
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, and India. In 1990, the country where Australia sold their products the most was Japan, recording 27
percent
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per cent
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 of its amount of exports.The following country was
US
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the US
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, as of 10 percent.
However
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, both
China
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 and India showed pretty
similiar
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similar
 figures in that year, indicating 1 or 2
percent
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per cent
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 each. Interestingly, the
percentage
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 of
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export
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exports
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 to Japan
continuosly
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continuously
 dropped after it hit the highest
percentage
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in
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at
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 the beginning of the
years
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year
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. Meanwhile, the
percentage
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 of
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export
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exports
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 to
China
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 drastically skyrocketed as time
goes
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went
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 on. In 2012, the
percentage
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 of Australian
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export
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exports
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 to
China
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 hit
the
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apply
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first place
as of
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apply
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close to 30
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percentage
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per cent
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while
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 the
other's
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other
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 graph showed
constant
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a constant
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 decrease.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, china, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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