The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
The bar graph gives information about the time used by the British regarding three types of telephone calls (local fixed
line
, national-international fixed line
, and mobiles
) between 1995 to
2002.
Generally, the Correct word choice
and
local-fixed
Correct your spelling
local fixed
line
had a stable usage pattern, while
the other two call types tended to surge throughout the years.
In reference to local
network, there were about slightly above 70 Add an article
the local
a local
billion
minutes
spend
in 1995, which Wrong verb form
spent
continously
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continuously
increase
until 90 Wrong verb form
increased
billion
minutes
in 1999, then
finally
plummetting
to the initial amount Wrong verb form
plummeted
as
in 2002.
The national-international-fixed Change preposition
apply
line
and mobiles
, the number climbed within eight years. Even though the national-international and mobiles
have a significant time usage difference in the beginning, in which almost 40 billion
minutes
and just above 0 minutes
respectively, but
the Correct word choice
apply
mobiles
have a considerable growth which make
in 2002 there were only 20 Change the verb form
makes
billion
minutes
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