The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The column chart illustrates the population rate in the United Kingdom who consumed the recommended per day number of vegetables and fruits during the period of 8
years
.
From an over all
perspective, it is noticeable that females had the highest percentage of the usage of Correct your spelling
overall
the
fruits and vegetables. Correct article usage
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However
, kids consumed the lowest rate of food.
As the graph demonstrates, women witnessed the highest level of consumption during the eight years
. Moreover
, in 2002, it reached about 25% and in 2006 it increased slightly to peak at approximately 30%. Yet, it decreased softly in 2010 and reached about 26%.
On the one hand, males and kids underwent less amount of usage of fruits and vegetables in the
all Remove the article
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years
. Moreover
, men
rate of consumption was near Change noun form
men's
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to
women
usage, Change noun form
women's
however
; it was lower than them
by 3% during the period of eight Correct pronoun usage
theirs
years
. On the other hand
, children had the lowest degree in all period
from the beginning to the Fix the agreement mistake
periods
last
. They consumed about half the ladies
consumption in all Change noun form
lady's
ladies'
years
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