The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The framework illustrates the recycling process of
glasses
. Generally, there are six steps and most of them are machine-based processes. The stages started with the collection of
glasses
from a signed recycle bin and ended with the delivery to grocery stores.
Firstly
, the empty and unused bottles are collected from the special green rubbish bin, which indicates the designated recycle bin.
Then
,
glasses
are transferred to the treatment truck by some heavy trucks. After that, the glass is inserted into the washing and sterilised machine to clean the surface of it and sterilize the
glasses
from bacteria and viruses.
Next,
the unused
glasses
are crushed by a pressing machine and molten with particular heat to transform their form into liquid.
Then
, the liquid
glasses
are processed into the moulding machine to shape the liquid
glasses
into the shape of the empty bottle.
Finally
, the recycled glass is delivered to the local grocery stores.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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