The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousands) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousands) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousands) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
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The bar chart illustrates the
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of males and females enrolled in higher education in Britain,
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full-time and part-time studies, during the past 21 years.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the
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of
men
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and
women
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studying part-time increased.
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the figures for
women
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in part-time education rose, it was not true for
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that they dropped. Regarding the full-time students, beginning at roughly 1 million at the start of the period, the
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of
men
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declined significantly to over 800,000 after 10 years, after which it experienced a slight rise of almost 850,000 in 1991. Meanwhile, the figures for
women
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increased sharply from approximately 700,000 to around 800,000, reaching a peak of over 1 million
at the end
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of the period. With the
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of students engaging in part-time education,
men
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's numbers underwent a steady climb from around 100 to under 200 after 21 years. For
women
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, there were approximately 50,000 of them in 1970, but these numbers rose significantly to 200,000 in 1980, after experiencing a gradual rise in 1991.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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