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The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific
potrions
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portions
 of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008. From an
overall
 perspective, significant numbers of all mentioned categories including
men
,
women
, and
children
 raised fruit and vegetables in their diet in the period of time. Looking at details, over a six-year period from 2001 to 2006, there
were
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 steady growth in statistics related to
women
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the women
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 population from 22 to 35
percent
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per cent
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, but
men
 and
children
 did not release sharp growth until 2003 which
were
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was
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 17 and 12
percent
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per cent
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.
Then
 they increased over a three-year course until 2006 to 27 and 24 per cent, respectively.
According to
 the graph, the gray and yellow diagrams which represent
men
 and
women
 show gradual falls in
discussed
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 topic from 2006 to 2008. The thing to point out is
children
 acted in a different
behavior
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 just for one year from 2006 to 2007,
then
 they dropped the feature either. At the endpoint, the chart shows the percentage of
children
,
men
 and
women
 who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK are 24, 26, and 30 per cent, respectively.
Also
, it can be seen that all three categories kept their place from the beginning to the end of the time period.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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