the graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods in the UK. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph
The line chart gives information about the consumption trends of fast foods in the UK in two decades from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
, the data shows that fish & chips and hamburger
significantly increased in that time. Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
In contrast
, pizza had a slight decrease.
In the 1970s, the consumption of pizza was the highest at 300 in the United Kingdom. However
, hamburger
and fish & Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
chips
were under 100 at that time. In the following years, the need for pizza minimally jumped down to 200 in 1985, Correct word choice
and chips
then
improved slightly to only 210 in 1990. On the other hand
, the consumption of fish and chips slowly grew in the next years, then
finally
dramatically climbed to 500 in 1990 which was its peak number. Similarly
, it happened to hamburger
which gradually rose to 110 in 1985. Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
Moreover
, the need for hamburger
by UK citizens had considerable growth in 1990 with nearly 300.Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
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