the graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods in the UK. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph

the graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods in the UK. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph
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The line chart gives information about the consumption trends of fast foods in the UK in two decades from 1970 to 1990.
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, the data shows that fish & chips and
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hamburger
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significantly increased in that time.
In contrast
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, pizza had a slight decrease. In the 1970s, the consumption of pizza was the highest at 300 in the United Kingdom.
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,
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and fish &
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were under 100 at that time. In the following years, the need for pizza minimally jumped down to 200 in 1985,
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improved slightly to only 210 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, the consumption of fish and chips slowly grew in the next years,
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finally
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dramatically climbed to 500 in 1990 which was its peak number.
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, it happened to
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which gradually rose to 110 in 1985.
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, the need for
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by UK citizens had considerable growth in 1990 with nearly 300.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburger with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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