The pie charts show the reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate why people emigrated from and immigrated to the
UK
in 2007.
Looking from an overall
perspective, immigration to the UK
was primarily related to occupational and educational reasons while
emigration from this
country was mostly for work only.
Looking at the charts, it is evidently apparent that definite jobs were the most common reason
for both entering and leaving the UK
, with 30% of UK
immigrants going to this
country and 29% of the emigrants leaving it for
this
reason
, respectively. The figures for formal study, on the other hand
, indicate a contrasting trend. Whilst this
was the second-most-popular reason
for immigrating to the UK
(at 26%), only 4% of the UK
students left their country for further
education, representing the least chosen reason
in the emigration chart.
Turning to the emigration chart, looking for a job was the second runner-up incentive why people emigrated from the UK
in 2007, with more than one-fifth of emigrants choosing this
reason
(22%) while
in the former chart, it accounts for only a bit more than a tenth of UK
leavers (12%).Submitted by tranbaongoc231007 on
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