Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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that is

of concern

every one

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is

students

are

being

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becoming

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more and more reliant on the

Internet

.

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the

Internet

bring

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a lot of

advantage

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but

also

the

Internet

has many negative effects and should be restricted for education purposes. Personally, I completely agree with

this

view for a variety of reasons.

To begin

with, many

students

are abusive

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of the

Internet

because the

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very convenient for

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searching for

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information.

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mean

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if depend too much on the

Internet

, it can lead to addiction. In fact, the

Internet

is only

benefit

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when we

use

it for

right

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the right

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purposes.

For example

, the

Internet

is a useful source

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for

students

,

such

as

students

can search about

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of

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.

Furthermore

, the

Internet

can help everyone in the world can communicate

each

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other. In fact, many couples get married even though they are not from the same country.

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, the

Internet

can help us communicate with family,

husband

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/wife by using video

call

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although

we live far from home. But

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beside

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that, the

Internet

also

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have

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many disadvantages, if using the

Internet

for

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a

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wrong purpose

such

as playing

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games

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game

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games

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or chatting all day,

this

can

effect

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to

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studying or

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does

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not care about health. And so that

students

are not too dependent on the

internet

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. Schools need to limit

students

'

use

of phones during class hours and should only

use

them when necessary to serve their studies. In conclusion, the

Internet

is convenient and has many

advantage

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and schools should be restricted if not

students

are becoming reliant on the

Internet

. In my opinion,

although

the

Internet

bring

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brings

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a lot of

beneficial

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benefits

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and we should only consider the

Internet

as a support tool, if

students

abuse will have

negative

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a negative

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effect.