The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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during
years
between 2003 and 2006.
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phenomenon. Moreover
, in 2005, the rate of internet
customers among 25-44 and 45-54 year-old ones were the same.
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seniors with 16-24 year-old were accounted for the most noticeable consumers at 80%, in 2003 and 2004, and 90 and 100% in 2005 and 2006 respectively. Correct article usage
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the numbers
numbers
of users with 45-54 rose from 60-80. Fix the agreement mistake
number
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