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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years.

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The pie charts detail the distribution of various
energy
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 sources in a given nation in the years 1995 and 2005. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that all the categories experienced an increase in their
production
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. Petrol, an exception, had a reverse pattern. Both gas and Coal were the main sources of
energy
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 in the given years. In detail, in 1995, the majority of
energy
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production
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 was coal and gas at 29,80% and 29,63% respectively. These figures remained the highest in 2005 which increased marginally by 1%.
In contrast
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, petrol was produced at 29.27% of the total amount of
energy
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 produced in 1995
then
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 the
production
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 sharply declined by 10% in 2005.
On the other hand
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, the
production
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 of nuclear was 6.40% in 1995 after 10 years had a significant rise of 10.10% in 2005. For the others recorded a noticeable growth at 9.10% in 2005 compared to 1995, it was 4,90%.
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