The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given tables present the numerical data about Faitrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
Use synonyms
selling
in five Wrong verb form
sold
countries
within Europe between 1999 and 2004.
Use synonyms
It
obvious that coffee Add a verb
It is
It was
were
sold very well in Change the verb form
was
UK
compared with in other four Correct article usage
the UK
countries
and the Use synonyms
sales
volume soared by nearly 15 times. Use synonyms
On
the same time, Change preposition
At
bananas
Use synonyms
experiences
the same pattern of selling in Change the verb form
experience
switzerland
as well dramatical ascending from 15 Change the capitalization
Switzerland
milliions
of euros to 47 Correct your spelling
millions
million
millions
.
Except in Change to singular
million
UK
and Switzerland, the increasing quantities of Correct article usage
the UK
sales
are not that stunning in Use synonyms
other
three Correct article usage
the other
countries
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
bananas
in Belgium Use synonyms
have
relatively higher upward the figure increased from 0.6 Verb problem
are
millions
in 1999 to 4 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2004 Change to singular
million
closely
7 times. Rephrase
nearly
In addition
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
bananas
Fix the agreement mistake
banana
slaes
volume saw a decline in Correct your spelling
sales
sweden
and Change the capitalization
Sweden
in
Denmark from 1999 to 2004, and only Change preposition
apply
bananas
volume Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
sales
decreased in 2004 in those two Use synonyms
countries
.Use synonyms
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