The diagrams below give information about the manufacutre of frozen fish pies.

The diagrams below give information about the 

manufacutre of frozen fish pies.
The diagram illustrates the various steps used to make a
fish
cake using some of the ingredients.
Overall
, the processing of
fish
pie
starts with getting potatoes for the process of making pies with salmon
fish
to the dispatched to the stores. First of all, manufacturing of pies are starts with getting yam in the factory with the help of a delivery truck after that it will be the potatoes
then
operations like peeling, and cutting done with the help of manual labour or automated
Then
potatoes
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are boiled in fresh water in a stove after that these chips are chilled with a freezer of the chiller are installed in the rollers. After that, it will stored in bags in a chiller place.
On the other hand
, for
fish
pie
salmon
fish
used for
this
fish
delivered to the factory within 12 hours because it needs to be fresh after getting
fish
is cut into small sections lime juice and salt are sprinkled on the
fish
after
this
operation cut the
fish
goes to the steam oven to get streamed fry
then
some workers are used to remove the skin and bones after that
fish
will inspected
then
get a peas and prepared
fish
in bowl after that pour a sauce in the bowl. At
last
, potato is added to the bowl to make the
pie
in the
last
step the
pie
will be packed in the container after that with the help of roller containers are sent to the freezer to dispatch the
pie
to the stores and restraint in a frozen box.
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