The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates data about comparison on how many labourers worked in several types of industry in Canada between 1850 and 2020.
Overall
, manufacturing, agriculture or fishing, and energy or water industries experienced a decrease in their workforce from 1850 to 2020. Whereas
, the people who worked in the services and construction sectors surged between those time spans.
The manufacturing industry's employees started at the highest level among others in 1850 at 36 per cent
. However
, its workforce dropped significantly to 9 per cent
in 2020. In 1850, the number of people having jobs in the agriculture sector was 22 per cent
of the total population before it finally
plummeted to the level of 1 per cent
in 2020. The energy sector had a more stable decrease in the number of employees which started at 3 per cent
in 1850 and then
declined slightly to 1 per cent
.
The services industry encountered a surge in its labour from 33 per cent
in 1850 to 81 per cent
in 2020. While
,
the construction sector had a slight increase since 1850 at the point of 5 per Remove the comma
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to 8 per cent
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