IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
The graph shows information about the percentage of
tourists
who visited Brighton attractions over a thirty-year period between 1980 and 2010. What stands out from the graph is that the
Pavilion
was by far the most popular attraction than that of the other attractions in question.
Overall
, the Pier and
Pavilion
witnessed a rise in the proportion of
tourists
,
while
the figures for the Festival and Art Gallery went down over the period shown. In 1980, the highest fraction of
tourists
(30%) was attracted to visit the Festival in Brighton.
This
value for the
Pavilion
and Art Gallery was almost 24 per
cent
and 22 per
cent
, respectively. The proportion of Pier visitors was nearly 10 per
cent
, which meant that it was visited less than the other attractions.
Following
this
, the figure related to the percentage of
tourists
who visited the
Pavilion
shot up and peaked at just under half of the total
tourists
in 1995 and
then
decreased significantly until 2010 by approximately 20%.
Although
the proportion of Festival visitors remained stable between 26 and 30 per
cent
, the percentage of Art Gallery visitors experienced a considerable fall after hitting a peak at about thirty-seven per
cent
in 1985. Another interesting point is that the fraction of
Pavilion
attraction visits by
tourists
fluctuated until 2000, and
then
rose to just over one-fifth of
tourists
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, pavilion, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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