The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005
The table
illutrates
the proportion of use of different fossil Correct your spelling
illustrates
energy
types to produce electric power in five Asian countries in 2005. Overall
, Malaysia and Singapore were the biggest customers of coal and lignite while
the remaining countries primarily used nuclear, petroleum, hydroelectric and wind or other powers instead
of coal and lignite for the year 2005.
In 2005, Malaysia and Singapore were the biggest customers of coal with 61% and 42% respectively. The proportion of energy
production by nuclear power was almost a
half in Japan and Correct article usage
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this
followed
by South Korea with around a Add a missing verb
was followed
third,
however
, Singapore mainly used Hydroelectic
centrals and wind turbines in order to generate electricity with just below Correct your spelling
Hydroelectric
a
half.
Thailand was an Correct article usage
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exeptional
example with almost no use of nuclear and coal Correct your spelling
exceptional
energy
in 2005, however
, they dominantly produced energy
from petroleum products and other energy
sources varied between 36% and 42%. The total energy
production from other sources of
Japan and South Korea was Change preposition
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39% in 2005.Submitted by historicalpen on
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