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the chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. summarize the information and make a comparison.

the chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. summarize the information and make a comparison.
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The bar charts illustrate the
percentage
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 of
coffee
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 and tea consumption habits of Australians in five different cities. (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart) After analysis, it can be seen clearly that. in terms of
people
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 who go to cafes for
coffee
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 and tea. the category shows the highest interest compared to other categories. Melbourne and Hobart have the highest contribution of
people
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 visiting the cafe at least 63%, over 60% is contribution residents in Sydney, with Brisbane and Adelaide following at 55% and 49% respectively.
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, the other two categories show a similar trend, consisting of
people
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 who buy fresh
coffee
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 and instant
coffee
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. Sydney and Melbourne there is a relatively smaller gap between these categories.
on the other hand
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, in three other cities, the residents who bought fresh
coffee
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 showed a lower
percentage
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 compared to the
percentage
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 of
people
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 who bought instant
coffee
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.
Overall
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, the various trends among
people
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 who purchase
coffee
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 and tea in five cities are at the same
percentage
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, coffee, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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