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The table shows data about underground railways systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railways systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the detailed information on underground railway systems which developed in six great cities in the world. It illustrates the data related to opening dates,
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 lengths and users in millions per
year
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.
Overall
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, what stands out from the table is that the most demanding railway system is Tokyo and the least demanding
one
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 is Kyoto. Another interesting point is that the longest
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 is in London,
while
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 the shortest
one
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 is in Kyoto. Looking at the details, London started the underground train in 1863, which is the oldest
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, which is the longest
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, but the amount of passengers is only 775
million
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 per capita.
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, the latest
one
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 is situated in Los Angeles, which developed in 2001 with 28 kilometres long and carries 50
million
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 per
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.
Although
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 Tokyo started in 1927 and the length of the
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 is medium, it serves maximum travellers of 1928
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 a
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. Paris is dedicated to 1191
million
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 passengers per
year
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 with a 199 km
route
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. Here, both passenger and length of the
route
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 are the second highest. Compared to the age, Washington DC serves a lower amount of users of 144
million
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 a
year
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.
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