The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provided data regarding the sources of the police
budget
in Britain, alongside the percentage of how the money was spent between 2017 and 2018.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the police had millions in the Linking Words
budget
from three distinct sources and it experienced an increase throughout the period. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the money was allocated to various needs, especially for three purposes.
In 2017, the police got a Linking Words
budget
with a total of £304.7 Use synonyms
million
, consisting of the National Government at £175.5 Use synonyms
million
as the highest source, followed by Local Taxes at £91.2 Use synonyms
million
and Others (e.g., grants) at £38 Use synonyms
million
. Those items had significantly grown to £318.6 Use synonyms
million
in one year.
Regarding the pie chart depicted, there was a significant change in dividing the available Use synonyms
budget
. During Use synonyms
this
period, salaries for officers and staff were the highest share at 75%. Linking Words
However
, it dropped to 69% in 2018. Linking Words
Conversely
, technology has risen from 8% to 14%. Meanwhile, buildings and transport remained steady at 17%. In conclusion, Linking Words
this
data shows that technology was the top priority, Linking Words
hence
the increase in the Linking Words
budget
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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