The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line chart provides the
expendiure
of Correct your spelling
expenditure
expenditures
books
in 4 difference
countries over 10 years.
Replace the word
different
Overall
, the all countries were growing at
in Change preposition
apply
particularly
, the main Change the word
particular
books
fees were in Germany over the whole periods
.
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period
Acorrding
to what Correct your spelling
According
shown
, the most Add a missing verb
is shown
books
fees consumed was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
german
Capitalize word
German
by
80 Change preposition
apply
millions
in 1995 Change to singular
million
thus
, slightly rose to reach exactly 90 millions
in 1999 and five years later it Change to singular
million
is reach
Wrong verb form
reached
it
peak Change the pronoun
its
nerly
100 Correct your spelling
of
millions
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million dollars
dollar
. On the othe
hand the Correct your spelling
other
least consuming
Correct word choice
lowest
books
fees Fix the agreement mistake
book
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Austria
which it was began Change preposition
in Austria
30
Change preposition
at 30
million
dollas
in 1995 Correct your spelling
dollars
then
slightly increased by 10 millions
dollars it constant over Change to singular
million
couple
Correct article usage
a couple
years
later Change preposition
of years
then
substintial climed more than half Correct article usage
a millions
millions
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million dollars
dollar
in 2005.
Comparing between
Change preposition
apply
france
and Change the capitalization
France
italy
were Change the capitalization
Italy
meet
in 1997 Wrong verb form
met
by
about 55 Change preposition
at
million
dollar
Change to a plural noun
dollars
then
, france
Change the capitalization
France
keep
its steady Wrong verb form
kept
increased
until Replace the word
increase
reach
its peak Wrong verb form
reached
approximatlly
above 70 Correct your spelling
approximately
million
dollar
opposite Change to a plural noun
dollars
italy
Change the capitalization
Italy
was
decreased to exactly 50 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
dollar
after that, it Change to a plural noun
dollars
was slightly increase
to just above 60 Change the verb form
was slightly increased
million
dollar
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, millions, dollar, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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