The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line chart provides the
expendiure
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expenditure
expenditures
of
books
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countries over 10 years.
Overall
, the all countries were growing
at
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in
particularly
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, the main
books
fees were in Germany over the whole
periods
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.
Acorrding
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to what
shown
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, the most
books
fees consumed
was
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german
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German
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by
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80
millions
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in 1995
thus
, slightly rose to reach exactly 90
millions
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million
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in 1999 and five years later it
is reach
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it
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peak
nerly
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of
100
millions
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million dollars
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dollar
. On the
othe
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other
hand the
least consuming
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lowest
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books
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book
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fees
was
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were
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Austria
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which it was began
30
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million
dollas
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dollars
in 1995
then
slightly increased by 10
millions
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million
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dollars it constant over
couple
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years
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later
then
substintial climed more than half
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a millions
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millions
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million dollars
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dollar
in 2005. Comparing
between
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france
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France
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and
italy
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Italy
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were
meet
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in 1997
by
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about 55
million
dollar
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dollars
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then
,
france
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keep
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its steady
increased
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until
reach
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its peak
approximatlly
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approximately
above 70
million
dollar
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opposite
italy
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was
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decreased to exactly 50
million
dollar
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dollars
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after that, it
was slightly increase
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to just above 60
million
dollar
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, millions, dollar, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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