You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Congratulate him/her for also being accepted * Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate * Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together

Dear Amir, I hope you are great. I’m writing to tell you about catching up at the
university
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of
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Digital Marketing
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in Paris,
Frace
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France
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. I was searching
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name in university admission and I realized your name was above the list. You don’t know how much I was over the moon
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moment. Congrats to you. I'm certain your family will be proud of you.
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, If you agree, after relocation we can be roommates and share everything with each other. Undoubtedly, your family will be happy to be roommates because we have a lot of experience and recollection. In fact, we grew up together. I’m so excited about doing things together in Paris. We would do plenty of things
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as watching movies, reading books in the library,
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game
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and even if we can
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in the French language institute
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we can better communicate with other people.
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go to the gym every morning and we can do everything that we can imagine. I’m waiting for your reply from you
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the reservation of
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Warm wishes, Mustafa
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